Subject: CP approval

From: "Peter W. Gayek" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 12 Jan 95 12:25:08 EST

The IBM team has reviewed 016 and we support granting it CP status.
The following are a few minor comments from our review which Alan
may wish to incorporate in his final edit, but only if this doesn't
delay the process of finishing up.

- Section 6.1, Flow #1 (first of the three parts)
  Steve Klein pointed we are missing a DLC_RESOLVE_R flowing right
  to left immediately after the ICANREACH_ex.  This is just fixing
  the example to match the state machine, which is correct.
- Section 6.1, Flow #1 (second of the three parts)
  Again, need a DLC_RESOLVE_R flowing right to left between the
  TEST_rsp and ICANREACH_ex.
- Section 7.5.7, 2nd paragraph (just changed)
  I think the terminology we all agreed to was "TCP connection", not
  "TCP circuit".  The latter may confuse people since everywhere else
  we are consistent.
- Section 8.6, the Note (just changed)
  Delete "following" from "... may be piggy-backed on any of the
  following message types listed in section 8.2."
- References, #2
  The publication cited is now obsolete.  The same NetBIOS info
  is now in "IBM LAN Technical Reference:  IEEE 802.2 and NETBIOS
  Application Program Interfaces", SC30-3587.  The -00 revision level
  was published in December 1993.

Peter Gayek
IBM Corporation